tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9112829201524658253.post6408994414533393598..comments2008-02-08T17:03:02.757-05:00Comments on Rose Colored Insanity: CritiquesAmyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10768439223560550218noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9112829201524658253.post-32626067594389517712008-02-04T17:19:00.000-05:002008-02-04T17:19:00.000-05:00I would very much appreciate a crit on my opening,...I would very much appreciate a crit on my opening, Savage Glee, but since the contest ended yesterday I understand if you are closed for business.<BR/><BR/>Thanks!Vanessa Concannonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04635599300208678468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9112829201524658253.post-51032289641982148122008-02-03T14:26:00.000-05:002008-02-03T14:26:00.000-05:00I'd love a crit on my opening, The Incredible Blan...I'd love a crit on my opening, The Incredible Blanco Brothers. I've been getting conflicted advice on it, since it's a bit unusual. It's been reworked maybe a hundred times, and although this is probably my best opening so far, I've got a feeling I may be a bit blind to its faults.<BR/><BR/>Any comments would sure help me figure out where to go with this. Thanks so much!Jordanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00850682345777206863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9112829201524658253.post-89109147343306910642008-02-03T12:22:00.000-05:002008-02-03T12:22:00.000-05:00Yes, please, I'd love to hear your comments:Red We...Yes, please, I'd love to hear your comments:<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://nathanbransford.blogspot.com/2008/01/surprisingly-essential-first-page.html#c9097039290276223924" REL="nofollow">Red Wedding</A><BR/>by David Wisehart<BR/><BR/>Timestamp: January 29, 2008 10:45 PM<BR/><BR/>Thanks!David Wiseharthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01438917127132239969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9112829201524658253.post-7639706246825942392008-01-31T11:25:00.000-05:002008-01-31T11:25:00.000-05:00Thanks for letting me know I was on the right trac...Thanks for letting me know I was on the right track!Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10768439223560550218noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9112829201524658253.post-24284586451527823412008-01-31T10:22:00.000-05:002008-01-31T10:22:00.000-05:00I wrote Wicked Sensibility, and from the time I po...I wrote Wicked Sensibility, and from the time I posted on Nathan's blog until you critiqued, I reworked the first page, because the same things occured to me. I appreciate your criticism, because it just reinforced for me the things that I felt were wrong all along. Thanks again!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215557278096889044noreply@blogger.com